take your time when you build RPG's .there is no rush.
It looks weird path and im talking about reaching the finish line ?! why down there?
When you do MT work , keep in mind that there is a frame with all the infos , your speed frame, etc... that come's on screen when you drive it.Plus, when played online, there is a chat, the ranks,etc....
So never put the texts all the way up there as you did but keep a gap, go play other rpg online to figurite out

And most of all don't make the text scroll fast like that !!? I could'nt only read some words , at all.
Good luck next time !
What a strange ideal ...toilet and momies ?! i don't get it